My World - Page 3

We finally get to see these two ladies' faces! Don't ask me why I hid them for two pages - I don't know what I was thinking when I did it, but at least it wasn't long to wait.

The only part of this page I'm unhappy with is Jillian's (the one in the suit) face in the last panel. I'm not sure what exactly was wrong, but I couldn't fix it. I'm also having a lotta trouble figuring out how to do her bangs right.

And that concludes the introduction to My World. This is all the public is going to see until I have the first arc written - of completed pages, that is. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!!